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9. Mechanics of writing: The format, presentation, and style of writing match the expectations of the
intended audience; it is accurate, appropriately structured, and grammatically correct.
How does the writing itself add to or detract from the writer’s overall purpose?
a. Give two examples of especially well-phrased and nicely written sentences.

b. Give two examples where the grammar, punctuation, or sentence structure could be improved.

10. Effective use of Language: Words are used appropriately and defined when necessary to effectively
convey meaning; the writer is careful to minimize unnecessary jargon.
Does the writer use language appropriately?
a. Does the writing include definitions when needed or use language that the intended audience will
understand and appreciate?

b. Could the writing could be made more clear by offering a definition or alternative wording?

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